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    I woke up to a normal day. The team was in a tavern while my husband was still asleep in his warm, cosy bed. I sat up in my own bed and sat in the eerie silence. The voice in my head was not here. My master and my conscience was gone. I waited for him to speak to me, but nothing stirred, with the exception of my heartbeat speeding up. I even called to him.
    "Master?" I asked. There was no reply. I had never spoken to him before and he had the silliest reactions to even the smallest of things. My dialogue would be a first. "Master?" I asked again. The voice remained dormant. This began to terrify me. I began to panic. "Is something wrong? Did something happen?" I asked. After a nerve-racking silence, I pounded my fist against my leg. "Answer me!" I yelled, waking my husband. He approached my bed.
    "Vahl? Are you alright?" he asked in a soft tone. I burst out the door without paying him any mind. All I really cared about was finding that special voice in my head.
    I ran throughout the village to find any sign of him. I even searched throughout Skyrim, leaving my comrades behind. Finally, I returned to where it all began with him: The ship that was destroyed on my way to the land of Skyrim. I stopped at the shore. "Master?" I called out once more. After even more silence, I hesitantly dove into the chilling water. I searched throughout the boat with no trace of him. I climbed to the only part of the boat that was not submerged in water. There was no soul to be found.
    "Master, where are you? Please, answer me!" I screamed, praying for an answer. There was none. This threw me into insanity. I slumped to my knees, hands clutched to my head. "Master, did you... leave me? Why?" A tear streamed down my face, quickly turning to ice. I foolishly squeezed my eyes shut in melancholy. I lifted my eyelids, but they would not separate. "Master? I cannot see! Master, please help me!" I cried. "MASTER!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. Nothing could be heard except for my echoes.
    I stood up and tried to escape the boat. The only problem was my inability to see. I prayed to the nine for my safety as I jumped, hoping I was swimming towards the shore. The nine heard my prayers and answered them, leading me to the safety of the shore. What I didn't notice was the bandits that were waiting for me.
    "Surrender everything of your belonging, or else!"
    "Foolish dark elf, give us your coins peacefully. Otherwise, your death will be an early one!" The bandits surrounded me. In one final resort, I fumbled clumsily for my sword and drew it out of its sheath.
    "Aside from my wealth, I've nothing to lose!" I sobbed, bravely. I began to swing the sword randomly while my foes began to have at me. One of the men smacked me off my feet. His accomplice pushed me down with his mace. My eyelids filled with water as I was beaten. Once I began to fade, they stopped.
    "It appears that this will be your final moment. Say what you wished to say," said one of the bandits.
    "Master," I began. "Do not weep for me. Perhaps I will go to where you are now." I sounded like a lunatic, but I did not care. I felt like a bird in my final minute on this cruel, unforgiving world, with no care in the world any more. Finally, one of the bandits landed the killing blow upon my head. With that, I could not feel a thing any more.
    I was shrouded with a white light. Where was I? How did I get here? How was I able to see now? Was I dead? Finally, I was surrounded by my original crew that sailed with me to Skyrim.
    "It's about time we reunited, Vahl," said Xavier, the captain of the ship and my childhood friend. Oh, how soothing it was to hear his voice once again. His arms opened and I leapt into them. I had a million questions circling my head, but I still felt like a bird. I really did not care. I did not care that I lost my master any more. I was surrounded by my practical family once again.
    "That must have been quite an adventure," remarked Serina, a khajiit who was like a sister to me.
    "You must hear about my comrades! They are an adventure on their own!"
This idea was sparked by MCab719's drawing (jordanventurian.deviantart.com… as I asked the question, "What does Vahl do once Jordan leaves?" So I kind of played with the idea here, in this fanfic. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK OF FEELZ! Waaaah! I had a lot of fun writing this, even though it was a bit difficult, being only on episode 8 and this being my first writing of someone actually going insane. Let's just take the time to remember the fun these two have had so far together as you read this. Enjoy if possible.
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ExplosionsOfIron Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
"I sounded like a lunatic, but I DID NOT CARE. I felt LIKE A BIRD in my final minute on this cruel, unforgiving world, with no care in the world any more."

Clever girl.
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, what can I say? XD
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I made a video of me reading this! I cried during the making of it...XD That is to be expected I guess.

Here is The Video if You Wish To Read It!:
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I almost cried at the fact that somebody loved this enough to put this on youtube! I really didn't expect this! This is awesome! I love you soooo much! Thank you!
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome! I also added the picture you drew as the thumbnail! 
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! This is so cool!
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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Gca1030 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
V-Vahl? You there? *whimpers*
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*pat pat* She's gone, man.
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flyingcheese143 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Why would you write something about Vahl dying?
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BECAUSE I'M EVIL!!! MUAHAHAHA!!!! Ahem! Sorry. I, uh, I dunno what happened... Actually, that's just how the story came out. I just go with the flow with my stories and that's just how it came along. Honestly, I'm surprised with what happened to Vahl. I read it and I said to myself, "Wow. I am really dark." I genuinely surprised myself with this, and I obviously gave so many people feels.
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flyingcheese143 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
lol, yeah. gave me some feels.
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What. The. Heck!? This made me cry! Oh my gosh! My tears wont stop! Why!? WHY!?
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cuz I said so.
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well then. XD
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:p
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Anyways. This is a very good story you have written friend. It made me cry....and not a lot of stories can do that!
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! Means a lot! XD
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Magicnikie14 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THE FEELS!!!  DX
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wait till you hear the song I wrote for Lil' Vent.
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Magicnikie14 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no...I better get ready for a bucket of feels.I think I've fainted. 
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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Javott Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:epic-shock: OMG ANOTHER SHOCK. OMG SHOCK. Shock Emote Cry emote :crying: rvmp Fappy Cry I don't wannaaa  THIS IS SO WRONG BUT SO PERFECT UGH I AM DROWNING IN FEELS WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Opportunity, my dear friend. That was a perfect story idea that I couldn't let slip away. I WARNED YOU ABOUT TEH FEELZ!!! But, yeah.
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Javott Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaahhhhhh
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ClaraDerps Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ME TOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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JordanVenturian Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
O__________________________O What. The... Heck. Wow... that was... wow. Amazing writing... Feelz.... Wonderfully written, but WOW! I think this killed me... and now I'll have a panic attack everytime I turn off Skyrim. XD Amazing story!
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man. I am giving so many people the feelz. Perhaps I will someday be the new Steven Moffat... ;) (Wink)
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MCab719 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am sorry. This is all my fault...
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ClaraDerps Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a panic attack any time a Skrim video ends...
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JordanVenturian Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
It could very well... be the last episode ever...
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ClaraDerps Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THATS EXACTLY WHAT GOES THROUGH MY HEAD!!!!!!!!!!! Not really, I know you wouldn't abandon the series... I HOPE...
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BenPlus Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But-but she can't die! Then my story would be obsolete. D:
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ClaraDerps Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess...
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Sydney0326 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I have an all new respect for the avatar for every save file I've ever deleted on any game...
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ClaraDerps Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my word!!! The feels!!!!!
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MCab719 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HOLY JEEZ THAT WAS FAST!!!!!
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh. It came around quickly. Usually it takes about 2 hours to write a chapter in my TF2 fanfic! This idea just flourished.
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MCab719 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that feel all too well. I'll read it and tell you what I think in a bit. Doing hw at the moment.
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okii!
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MCab719 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, I read it and.... NO WHAT YOU KILLED VAHL OFF?!?!?!??!?!?! KLSAJALJGFISUGAJLAHKLISGKFLHA
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'M SORRY!!! DSJKFRAKDGHUYVAEURVHAKDJGUHTYJMX Okay. She might have died, but she ends up happy. It's sad, but welcome to my messed up little mind! XD
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MCab719 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well... I did say that "my part in the story is over" ... I wonder what Jordan'll say about this.
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fangfangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He'll have a cow! XD
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